Just Before Green
a poem after Barbara Crooker

Just Before Green after Barbara Crooker If you were to ask me about that spring just before green when everything was new, I would tell you it was a flowered cotton dress pulled from the closet and slipped over a budding body, foal legs on the last day of school. The bell sounding like breaststrokes and sunburn shivering at the edge of the public pool. It was a chiffon cake topped with fresh sugared bites of lemon at his birthday party, chlorine skin, cut grass breeze and those soft, clean sheets. Oh, breath of perfume, kissed lobes, wrists, knees. It was the feathered thing the lonely poet once called hope spreading its wings.
I’ve been busy putting together prompts for my April Writing Series and doing my best to also write to them every day. This one is inspired by a phrase from Barbara Crooker’s poem, Spring.
Writing to prompts doesn’t always take us where we expect it to. I often have the urge to corral my poem back into a safe pen, but when I let it run loose, I am always surprised where it ends up leading me.
I hope you’re following where inspiration wants to take you this month.
Thanks for stopping by.
Wishing you blue skies,
Ellen


Lovely!
A lovely poem. I especially love 'budding body, foal legs', a wonderful example of show, don't tell.